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tengkuizdihar programming.dev tengkuizdihar@programming.dev
Joined: 2023-12-13
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Link: https://solver-orgz.codeberg.page/novel/

It's fictional, of course. I hope you can give me a critique about my writing. The style, what's wrong with it, plot holes, sentences that doesn't make sense, the lot.
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