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JohnnyEnzyme
piefed.social
JohnnyEnzyme@piefed.socialJoined: 2025-06-11 |
For Better Or For Worse tribute-edit, by Mike Peters of "Mother Goose & Grimm," 1997. Not sure how many here remember these. FBoFW ended about 10yrs later, after a ~30yr run. It was one of those rare-ish strips that aged the characters naturally. MG&G is still going strong. From the Great Switcheroo project. |
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tyranny
crazypeople.online
tyranny@crazypeople.onlineJoined: 2026-06-11 |
great edit, great fourth wall break, great art style, holding the speech bubble in hand makes the joke nice and clear. my only gripe would be that it takes 3 panels of confusion before the payoff, which feels like a long stretch |
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JohnnyEnzyme
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JohnnyEnzyme@piefed.socialJoined: 2025-06-11 |
great edit, great fourth wall break, great art style, holding the speech bubble in hand makes the joke nice and clear. my only gripe would be that it takes 3 panels of confusion before the payoff, which feels like a long stretch
I'm a fan of tension-building, so that actually works for me. It's reasonably witty / amusing dialogue too, IMO. If it wasn't, then yeah, 3 panels would probably feel long. Also, I'm thinking that the authentic FBoFW typically ran 4 panels, so it's also a nod to that. |
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tyranny
crazypeople.online
tyranny@crazypeople.onlineJoined: 2026-06-11 |
my only gripe would be that it takes 3 panels of confusion before the payoff, which feels like a long stretch I'm a fan of tension-building, so that actually works for me. It's reasonably witty / amusing dialogue too, IMO. If it wasn't, then yeah, 3 panels would probably feel long. Also, I'm thinking that the authentic FBoFW typically ran 4 panels, so it's also a nod to that.
i think if it were more clear from the humans' faces that they're perplexed and alarmed by the words coming out of their mouths, it'd work more for me. i hear your point though, it's nice to stick to an established formula, especially when you're doing something different conceptually |
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JohnnyEnzyme
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JohnnyEnzyme@piefed.socialJoined: 2025-06-11 |
i think if it were more clear from the humans' faces that they're perplexed and alarmed by the words coming out of their mouths, it'd work more for me. i hear your point though, it's nice to stick to an established formula, especially when you're doing something different conceptually
Funny, they look plenty perplexed & alarmed over here compared to their normal faces, but that's as a long-time reader. I could see for less-familiar readers that they just look kind of blank-faced. Whatever. We each have our own lens. |
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shweddy
lemmy.world
shweddy@lemmy.world Joined: 2026-03-21 |
What's the comic with the old Lady and the dog? |
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JohnnyEnzyme
Moderator
JohnnyEnzyme@piefed.socialJoined: 2025-06-11 |
What's the comic with the old Lady and the dog?
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FauxPseudo
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FauxPseudo@lemmy.worldJoined: 2023-07-09 |
This could be my house when my wife is having a bad day. |
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Mnem667
sh.itjust.works
Mnem667@sh.itjust.works Joined: 2023-06-15 |
Man, I haven't thought about either of these strips in |
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tyranny
crazypeople.online
tyranny@crazypeople.onlineJoined: 2026-06-11 |
Funny, they look plenty perplexed & alarmed over here compared to their normal faces, but that's as a long-time reader. I could see for less-familiar readers that they just look kind of blank-faced. Whatever. We each have our own lens.
i hear you, ive never encountered the comic before, but i imagine I'm not the target audience of a long-running strip like this |
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Swedneck
discuss.tchncs.de
Swedneck@discuss.tchncs.deJoined: 2023-06-10 |
great edit, great fourth wall break, great art style, holding the speech bubble in hand makes the joke nice and clear. my only gripe would be that it takes 3 panels of confusion before the payoff, which feels like a long stretch
i kinda like it, it becomes its own joke a-la heathcliff's absolute nonsense presented without clarification |
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