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![]() Link: https://old.reddit.com/r/nosleep/comments/1v95r2i/when_i_turned_thirteen_my_father_told_me_a_man/ This is an automated archive made by the Lemmit Bot.The original was posted on /r/nosleep by /u/gamalfrank on 2026-07-28 17:49:52+00:00. Growing up in that isolated valley meant learning to live with a very specific kind of silence. The town was small, tucked away between steep forested hills that blocked out the horizon, and the people who lived there liked the isolation. They kept their lawns manicured, their houses painted, and of course their secrets buried. Everyone knew the law. It was not written in any civic charter, but it was taught to every child the moment their bodies began to change. The transition into adulthood brought the man. On the day of my thirteenth birthday, my mother died. The sheriff told us she had slipped in the steep ravine behind our property, but the details were kept vague, and the casket was kept closed during the service. In the middle of that devastating fog, while the smell of funeral flowers still clung to the living room, my father sat me down at the kitchen table. He looked older than his forty years, his hands shaking as he pushed a glass of water toward me. "There is something you are going to see now," he said. His voice was cracked, his eyes refusing to meet mine. "He will stand in the background of your life. He might be at the edge of the woods when you walk home from school, or stand near the mailbox while you do the dishes. But you must never look him in the eye, and never speak to his face. To acknowledge him is to break the order of this valley." "Who is he?" I asked, my voice barely a whisper. "He is the one who follows," my father replied. "You are the only one who will see your specific follower. Everyone has one. We do not talk about them, or even look at them. That is the only way we stay safe." The reality of his words hit me three days later. Walking home from the bus stop, the gravel crunching under my sneakers, a sudden sensation of cold air brushed against my neck. Turning my head slightly, a tall figure in a dark, outdated coat was standing near the old oak tree at the corner of our road. His face was somewhat obscured by the shadow of a wide-brimmed hat, but his posture was rigid, his attention locked entirely on me. My heart tried to escape my chest, but my father’s warning echoed in my mind. I forced my gaze back to the road and kept walking. Living with him became a slow, grinding torment. He was always there. When I did my homework, he stood in the twilight of the back yard. When I went to the grocery store, he sat on the bench outside the entrance. Only I could see him. People would walk right through the space he occupied, their bodies passing through his dark form like mist, completely oblivious to his presence. My father did not handle the grief of my mother's death well. As the years passed, he fell deep into drinking, spending his nights locked in the basement or passed out on the living room sofa. The smell of cheap whiskey became a permanent fixture of our home. He stopped checking on me, stopped asking about school, and only spoke to warn me whenever he noticed my eyes lingering too long on the dark corners of the yard. By the time I reached my senior year of high school, the tension in the town had reached a boiling point. One of my classmates, a quiet boy who sat in the back of my English class, vanished without a trace over a weekend. His locker was left full of books, his bicycle still chained to the school fence. The rumors spread through the hallways like wildfire. The elders of the town held an urgent assembly in the gymnasium, their faces grim under the bright gym lights. The principal stood at the podium, his voice stern. "We must remind you all of the rules of our community. The boy who went missing forgot his place. He broke the silence. Do not make his mistake. Keep your head down and focus on your studies." The warning did not satisfy me. The vanished boy had been a friend of my closest classmate, a girl who lived down the road from me. After school, we sat on the hood of my car, watching the sun dip behind the steep hills. "His parents are completely destroyed," my friend said, her fingers twisting the strap of her backpack. "They won't even open the front door. The elders told everyone to stay away from their house." "We should go see them," I said. "Just to offer some comfort. It isn't right to leave them isolated like this." My friend hesitated, looking toward the dark woods bordering the school. "If the town council sees us there, we will be in trouble." "We will go after dark," I insisted. "Through the back trail." We made our way to the vanished boy's house later that evening, navigating the overgrown path behind the old orchard. The house was dark, the only light coming from a single lamp in the living room. When we knocked, his mother opened the door only a crack, her face hollow and pale. "We just wanted to say we are sorry about him," my friend said quietly. The mother looked at us for a long time, her eyes darting to the shadows behind us. Eventually, she stepped aside and let us into the dusty hallway. "He stopped sleeping," the mother whispered, leading us into the living room. "He kept staring at the corner of his bedroom. We told him to look away, but he said the man was crying. He said the man wanted to tell him something." "Did he leave any note?" I asked, keeping my voice low. The mother shook her head. "The council came and cleared his room. They burned his journals in the yard. But they missed his old biology textbook. It was still in his closet." While my friend talked to the mother, I quietly slipped down the hallway to the boy's bedroom. The door was unlocked. The room had been stripped bare, leaving only an empty mattress and a pile of discarded school papers. In the back of the closet, half-hidden under a loose floorboard, I found the biology textbook. Tucked inside the back cover was a single, partially burnt page from a notebook. The handwriting was frantic, the ink smudged. “He wanted me to follow,” the note read. “He did not look angry. He nodded to me. I think he wants to show me how to end this madness. If I do not come back, know that I went to find the source. I am going to look him in the eye.” My hands shook as I folded the paper and slid it into my pocket. I went back to the living room, grabbed my friend, and we left the house through the back door. As we walked through the dark orchard, I pulled the paper out and showed it to her under the light of my phone. "I am going to do it," I said. My friend stopped walking, her face turning pale in the blue screen light. "Are you out of your mind? You saw what happened to him. He is gone." "He went to find a way to stop this," I argued. "We spend every single second of our lives in fear, pretending we don't see them. My father is drinking himself to death because of this town. My mother is dead because of this town. I want to know the truth." "If you look at him, he may kill you," she said, her voice rising in panic. "And of course the council won’t just let people break the law. If you do this, I cannot help you. I fear that I am not going to watch you die." “Ok ok, I won’t do it” I lied to her; she took a deep breath and said “Promise me” That’s when I couldn’t just do it, I stayed silent for a long time, just looking through her eyes, then I saw a small tear on her face. Then suddenly, She turned and ran back toward her house, leaving me alone under the dark branches of the apple trees. I walked back to my empty yard. My follower was waiting for me. He stood near the rusted garden gate, his tall, dark silhouette perfectly still against the gray mist of the evening. My father was passed out on the kitchen floor inside, an empty bottle of bourbon resting near his hand. Nobody was going to save me. Nobody was going to save this town. I took a deep breath, walked down the wooden steps of the porch, and marched directly toward the gate. I stopped three feet away from the tall figure. For the first time in my life, I raised my chin and looked directly into his face. Under the shadow of his hat, his skin was incredibly pale, almost translucent. His eyes were dark, sunken, and filled with a profound sadness. "I see you," I said clearly. At first, nothing happened. Then, the man’s rigid posture snapped. A loud, wet cracking sound echoed through the yard, like dry branches breaking under a boot. The lunged. His body elongated, twisting over the rusted iron of the gate with impossible speed. His hands, pale and gray, clamped around my throat before I could even flinch. The touch was a burning freeze that immediately locked my lungs. My knees buckled, but he held me upright, his grip lifting me slightly off the ground. His hat fell backward into the dirt. The face beneath was a nightmare. His mouth split open, unhinging like a snake's jaw, revealing a dark throat coated in wet, black soil. A rattling, choked wheeze erupted from his chest, spraying a dust onto my cheeks. His eyes, previously hidden, widened into deep, empty sockets that seemed to pull the very light out of the yard. My vision began to darken at the edges. My lungs screamed for air, but every time I tried to inhale, the air just refused to come. Yet, I did not close my eyes. I refused to look away. I stared directly into the void of his face, holding his freezing, dead gaze with a desperate, furious resolve. The creature froze. The snapping joints went silent. 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