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pranktoy lemmy.world pranktoy@lemmy.world
Joined: 2026-06-15
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Tell me what you think, so far. Im new to oil.

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[object Object] lemmy.ca panda_abyss@lemmy.ca
Joined: 2025-07-20
#2 · (edited) Quote Reply

Love it!

It’s much better than my first oil that’s for sure

Since you asked, my only real feedback is that the second (left) index finger could use a little shading touch up to make the first knuckle/segment look nicer/more proportional.

Everything else looks pretty good, great colour, contrasts, clear concept, and the “texture” is awesome.

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its_kim_love lemmy.blahaj.zone its_kim_love@lemmy.blahaj.zone
Joined: 2025-10-14
#3 · Quote Reply

It reminds me of my pawpaw's hands. So blocky and square. There's always a story in people's hands.

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SaveTheTuaHawk lemmy.ca SaveTheTuaHawk@lemmy.ca
Joined: 2025-03-07
#4 · Quote Reply

Or Superman making diamond from coal.

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ChicoSuave lemmy.world ChicoSuave@lemmy.world
Joined: 2023-08-12
#5 · Quote Reply

Lovely. Reminds me of a lyric: "we're never alone if we can offer help"

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Herbal Gamer sh.itjust.works HerbalGamer@sh.itjust.works
Joined: 2023-10-30
#6 · Quote Reply

The little light triangle underneath right hands index finger makes it look like the hands are around a lightbulb and now I can't unsee it.

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Coelacanth feddit.nu Coelacanth@feddit.nu
Joined: 2023-07-04
#7 · (edited) Quote Reply

The little light triangle underneath right hands index finger makes it look like the hands are around a lightbulb and now I can't unsee it.

That's the Hope, he caught it in his hands.

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pranktoy lemmy.world pranktoy@lemmy.world
Joined: 2026-06-15
#8 · Quote Reply

The little light triangle underneath right hands index finger makes it look like the hands are around a lightbulb and now I can't unsee it.

Thats the whole point, there is also going to be light coming from in between the fingers, sort of leaking out 😅

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Snowman_sir lemmy.world Snowman_sir@lemmy.world
Joined: 2026-02-04
#9 · Quote Reply

What size canvas is this? 🤔

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mbp slrpnk.net mbp@slrpnk.net
Joined: 2026-04-06
#10 · Quote Reply

Lovely!!! Such a thoughtful concept.

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Tikiporch lemmy.world Tikiporch@lemmy.world
Joined: 2023-08-03
#11 · Quote Reply

What size canvas is this? 🤔

1125x1500

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isleepinahammock lemmy.blahaj.zone isleepinahammock@lemmy.blahaj.zone
Joined: 2024-09-06
#12 · Quote Reply

That wing nut isn't painted on, is it??

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pranktoy lemmy.world pranktoy@lemmy.world
Joined: 2026-06-15
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What size canvas is this? 🤔

20 x 20 cm ( 7,87 x 7,87 inches)

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Herbal Gamer sh.itjust.works HerbalGamer@sh.itjust.works
Joined: 2023-10-30
#14 · Quote Reply

Thats the whole point, there is also going to be light coming from in between the fingers, sort of leaking out 😅

I feel you should incorporate the dark space down there in the middle more then

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fakeman_pretendname feddit.uk fakeman_pretendname@feddit.uk
Joined: 2023-07-01
#15 · Quote Reply

It certainly looks like you're going in a good direction - it's hard to really comment without knowing what you're aiming for stylistically or in terms of detail (or fluidity) - or how far through it you are, and what you intend to focus on next.

Generally though, it's looking really good.

One thing (for future reference, not in this piece) is that I feel the very coarse canvas texture is spoiling things a bit and taking the focus away from your actual brushwork.

Unless you're deliberately going for that look, for a smaller scale piece (I think you said this is 20cm x 20cm?) you might be better off working on board, or if you're sure about using canvas, doing a few more layers of gesso and sanding first, so you've got a flatter surface to work on.

It's not worth really worrying about surface prep and stuff if you're just learning, testing things and experimenting, but it does look like you're painting at a high enough level to warrant doing it.

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Noodle07 lemmy.world Noodle07@lemmy.world
Joined: 2023-07-20
#16 · Quote Reply

Ok im tired but... I'm imagining you with your hands like that as a model while you're trying to paint them with the brush in your mouth 😂 sorry I'm going to bed it's way past time

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