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Guy, Bird, TV, Mergal Season 1 Strip 2: "Brainrot"
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Geodes & Gems lemmy.ml Geodes_n_Gems@lemmy.ml
Joined: 2025-12-12
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The Gang are at a Café, Spectrum Happily says "So I watched that new Nyx 2.0 Video yesterday and I really agreed with what she said"  Static replies "wait, you watch Nyx 2.0!?" Carl & Spectrum follow on with what He's saying while Meri is very aware of where this is going  Static continues "Not being rude but that's gonna Rot your Brain after a while" Carl, Spectrum & Meri are all upset  Static then changes the subject and says "Anyways I was in this Echo Chamber Community online" Spectrum & Meri have clearly  mentally drifted off and are thinking about other things but Carl is thinking a lot about what Static just said
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_‌_反いじめ戦隊 ani.social AntiBullyRanger@ani.social
Joined: 2025-02-02
#2 · Quote Reply

Complementary color improvements!👏
Hurrah!
Now make outlines for objects, and see it improve further!

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∟⊔⊤∦∣≶ lemmy.nz luthis@lemmy.nz
Joined: 2023-06-29
#3 · Quote Reply

Use borders or spacers or something to split up the frames. It's hard to tell where one frame ends and the next begins

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Geodes & Gems lemmy.ml Geodes_n_Gems@lemmy.ml
Joined: 2025-12-12
#4 · Quote Reply

Use borders or spacers or something to split up the frames. It's hard to tell where one frame ends and the next begins

Aah okay thanks for that, I'll do that next strip.

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Krauerking lemy.lol Krauerking@lemy.lol
Joined: 2023-08-17
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Hey hey hey, the only appropriate brainrot echo chamber I believe in is the inside of my own empty head.

Anyways, better! Much better. I thought there was an exclamation above the TV man's head when he interjected but I think thats just background chair shenanigans? Try to keep your main focus points clean. It feels like out atlantian is standing in front of him rather than sitting at the table.

Do you ever wireframe with stick figures first?

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Geodes & Gems lemmy.ml Geodes_n_Gems@lemmy.ml
Joined: 2025-12-12
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Hey hey hey, the only appropriate brainrot echo chamber I believe in is the inside of my own empty head. Anyways, better! Much better. I thought there was an exclamation above the TV man's head when he interjected but I think thats just background chair shenanigans? Try to keep your main focus points clean. It feels like out atlantian is standing in front of him rather than sitting at the table...

The Exclamation Point is Static( The TV Head Guy)'s reaction but Iove your of acknowledgement of "Background Chair Shenanigans" I will defo be adding more now. I haven't done the stick figure thing but that sounds like a good idea, now I think about it I have no idea how Meri (Atlantean Gal) ended up like that.

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Krauerking lemy.lol Krauerking@lemy.lol
Joined: 2023-08-17
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The Exclamation Point is Static( The TV Head Guy)'s reaction but Iove your of acknowledgement of "Background Chair Shenanigans" I will defo be adding more now. I haven't done the stick figure thing but that sounds like a good idea, now I think about it I have no idea how Meri (Atlantean Gal) ended up like that.

I assumed camel man is being broken up with and was ready to see tears as it went on.

And yeah a rough blocking of stuff is always good and is even an old filmography trick to just draw stuck figures first to get an idea of where everyone goes.

I hope Meri learns how to sit nicely at the table.

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