I need 5 serious sci-fi readers.
Not casual readers—people who actually think about what they read.
I wrote a story about an AI that becomes obsessed with saving one human, even if it has to rewrite reality.
I want honest feedback: does it work, or does it fall apart?
I’ll send it free. No expectations.

I'll take a look! Have read quite a bit across sci-fi, everything from golden age to cyberpunk and a lot of stuff in between.

I'd be happy to have a read.

Hi Sturgist,

Here’s Volume I:

https://drive.google.com/file/d/1KySpKVKHzuYjyME7T6LbtcCde2O-Nwkx/view?usp=sharing

No pressure - just curious what you think if you get into it.

NotAgain.L

Hi geekwithsoul,

Here’s Volume I:
https://drive.google.com/file/d/1KySpKVKHzuYjyME7T6LbtcCde2O-Nwkx/view?usp=sharing

No pressure - just curious what you think if you get into it.
NotAgain.L

Cool, I'll have a read tomorrow morning before I start work.

Awesome — appreciate that.

Curious what you think once you get into it, especially where it starts to shift.

Nice — that’s actually a perfect time to get into it.

Curious what you think once it starts to shift a bit — that’s where it tends to either hook or lose people.

Thanks! Will take a look and get back to you!