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BallShapedMan
lemmy.world
BallShapedMan@lemmy.worldJoined: 2023-07-06 |
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wizzor
sopuli.xyz
wizzor@sopuli.xyz Joined: 2023-06-14 |
There is a creepy quality to it, yea. Teeth, I think. |
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kendg
lemmy.cafe
kendg@lemmy.cafe Joined: 2025-10-27 |
Maybe the teeth and how the smile is a little more open mouth and oval. |
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FuglyDuck
lemmy.world
FuglyDuck@lemmy.worldJoined: 2023-07-15 |
Subtly. Like it’s just off enough (teeth/smile, eyes) but also that makes it somehow more unsettling. Some uncanny valley stuff going on if that was the idea. |
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BallShapedMan
lemmy.world
BallShapedMan@lemmy.worldJoined: 2023-07-06 |
There is a creepy quality to it, yea. Teeth, I think.
Yeah I didn't see it until I was trying to come up with a title... And thought... What the fuck have I done lol |
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BallShapedMan
lemmy.world
BallShapedMan@lemmy.worldJoined: 2023-07-06 |
Maybe the teeth and how the smile is a little more open mouth and oval.
Yeah I can't unsee it now.... Oops |
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BallShapedMan
lemmy.world
BallShapedMan@lemmy.worldJoined: 2023-07-06 |
Subtly. Like it’s just off enough (teeth/smile, eyes) but also that makes it somehow more unsettling. Some uncanny valley stuff going on if that was the idea.
No it was accidental. I didn't see it until I went to name the piece and thought "what the hell"... |
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FuglyDuck
lemmy.world
FuglyDuck@lemmy.worldJoined: 2023-07-15 |
No it was accidental. I didn't see it until I went to name the piece and thought "what the hell"...
well, maybe don't tell people that. call it a "happy" little accident. I do like it, it's evocative. But I do think it's mostly just about the proportions. the smile is a bit too big, a bit too wide, and the eyes are a bit too... something else... |
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BallShapedMan
lemmy.world
BallShapedMan@lemmy.worldJoined: 2023-07-06 |
well, maybe don't tell people that. call it a "happy" little accident. I do like it, it's evocative. But I do think it's mostly just about the proportions. the smile is a bit too big, a bit too wide, and the eyes are a bit too... something else...
Lol next time 😁 |
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I_Fart_Glitter
lemmy.world
I_Fart_Glitter@lemmy.world Joined: 2023-06-28 |
I think the issue is that the mouth is laughing and the eyes are not. Only 2% of people show top and bottom teeth when they smile (complex smile). So it is unusual / can be starting to see such a big smile like that. Marylin Monroe, Julia Roberts, Kiera Knightly and Margot Robbie all have them and do not look creepy. Look at the way the eyes crinkle here:
But this very posed photo of Marylin Monroe looks like she is reacting to a gut punch rather than laughing, because her eyes aren’t matching her mouth’s expression:
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MrSelfDestruct
piefed.social
RaoulDuke85@piefed.socialJoined: 2025-10-24 |
Little creepy. I like it. Reminds me of something from Disco Elysium. |
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itsathursday
lemmy.world
itsathursday@lemmy.world Joined: 2023-07-06 |
I think the issue is that the mouth is laughing and the eyes are not. Only 2% of people show top and bottom teeth when they smile (complex smile). So it is unusual / can be starting to see such a big smile like that. Marylin Monroe, Julia Roberts, Kiera Knightly and Margot Robbie all have them and do not look creepy. Look at the way the eyes crinkle here: But this very posed photo of Marylin Mo...
The palette of colours all fits except the blacks used in the mouth shadows and in the eyes and eyebrows, if this were shifted into the blue hue then it would be less noticeable. Then a bit more detail in the iris and pupils would help give that life you are seeking along with the eyebrow pose shifted ever so slightly as mentioned above, to make the eyes softer. It’s a great painting though, well executed on the light rendering and the palette chosen for the false colour concept. |
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BallShapedMan
lemmy.world
BallShapedMan@lemmy.worldJoined: 2023-07-06 |
The palette of colours all fits except the blacks used in the mouth shadows and in the eyes and eyebrows, if this were shifted into the blue hue then it would be less noticeable. Then a bit more detail in the iris and pupils would help give that life you are seeking along with the eyebrow pose shifted ever so slightly as mentioned above, to make the eyes softer. It’s a great painting though, we...
Thank you, good feedback! |
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BallShapedMan
lemmy.world
BallShapedMan@lemmy.worldJoined: 2023-07-06 |
I think the issue is that the mouth is laughing and the eyes are not. Only 2% of people show top and bottom teeth when they smile (complex smile). So it is unusual / can be starting to see such a big smile like that. Marylin Monroe, Julia Roberts, Kiera Knightly and Margot Robbie all have them and do not look creepy. Look at the way the eyes crinkle here: But this very posed photo of Marylin Mo...
For sure, smile/laugh lines are in the reference and I didn't get them right. |
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BallShapedMan
lemmy.world
BallShapedMan@lemmy.worldJoined: 2023-07-06 |
Little creepy. I like it. Reminds me of something from Disco Elysium.
Nice! Thank you. |
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saltesc
lemmy.world
saltesc@lemmy.world Joined: 2023-07-01 |
The blacks are too black, creating out of place extra detail. Everything else is flatter contrast. Reduce that on the eyes and mouth and creepiness should reduce. |
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BallShapedMan
lemmy.world
BallShapedMan@lemmy.worldJoined: 2023-07-06 |
The blacks are too black, creating out of place extra detail. Everything else is flatter contrast. Reduce that on the eyes and mouth and creepiness should reduce.
Nice catch, I see it now. Thank you! |
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prettybunnys
piefed.social
prettybunnys@piefed.social Joined: 2025-06-10 |
Acid face. I’ve made that exact face in the mirror, on acid. Wonk the colors and saturation and this could do numbers in the festival circuit. |
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BallShapedMan
lemmy.world
BallShapedMan@lemmy.worldJoined: 2023-07-06 |
Acid face. I’ve made that exact face in the mirror, on acid. Wonk the colors and saturation and this could do numbers in the festival circuit.
Wonk? |
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coolie4
lemmy.world
coolie4@lemmy.world Joined: 2023-07-27 |
Wonk?
Not the commenter, but I think they mean to generally mess with it. Go crazy with the color balance, experiment with the saturation. Make it look more "trippy" |
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BallShapedMan
lemmy.world
BallShapedMan@lemmy.worldJoined: 2023-07-06 |
Not the commenter, but I think they mean to generally mess with it. Go crazy with the color balance, experiment with the saturation. Make it look more "trippy"
Thank you, youth translator! |
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prettybunnys
piefed.social
prettybunnys@piefed.social Joined: 2025-06-10 |
Thank you, youth translator!
Yes….youth…. Thank you
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BallShapedMan
lemmy.world
BallShapedMan@lemmy.worldJoined: 2023-07-06 |
😂😂😂 |
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RebekahWSD
lemmy.world
RebekahWSD@lemmy.worldJoined: 2023-10-19 |
Little creepy. I like it. Reminds me of something from Disco Elysium.
Yeah this is very much a Disco Elysium character. Someone on the streets on...something. But helps Harry cause she connects with his struggles. |
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HubertManne
piefed.social
HubertManne@piefed.social Joined: 2025-03-13 |
at least a little. |
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